Page Two Mock-up!
Here is the page 2 mock-up! It is a bit rough around the edges but it serves the purpose. I think the story is on track. That’s the whole point of these. They help us see what is working and what is not. For example, in slapping this one together we realized that we will be needing a few more drawings at the beginning! (Sorry Jay! Your hands must be cramping up!).
We have also made some changes in style since mocking up page 1. The aspect ratio is now the iPad size…not sure what I was thinking before??? And we have decided to drop the text-overs during character dialogue.
Not sure if losing the text-over is the right way to go yet but that is what this stage is all about - trying things out. We are also experimenting with two types of read-along text animation. Not sure which, if either, will stay… Do you have a fav? Let us know! I think I have a better idea that I’ll try out on page 3’s pre-mock-up mock-up….
In any case, please give it a peek and enjoy!